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The rain is pouring,
The thunder is roaring,
I miss you still.
Even though you have gone,
My love for you goes on,
I can still remember your smile,
My heart is aching,
Soon it will be breaking,
I will never forget you.
Why couldn’t things be fairer in life?
Why did you have to have a wife?
I’m left on my own…forgotten.
The thunder is roaring,
I miss you still.
Even though you have gone,
My love for you goes on,
I can still remember your smile,
My heart is aching,
Soon it will be breaking,
I will never forget you.
Why couldn’t things be fairer in life?
Why did you have to have a wife?
I’m left on my own…forgotten.
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Written while thinking about a man I've been in love with for two years and who I'll never forget.
I'm not sure what to think about this though, somethings not right somewhere.
Couldn't really think of a title either.
I'm not sure what to think about this though, somethings not right somewhere.
Couldn't really think of a title either.
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Hey not bad, a little disjointed I think between the lines, trying to get it to rhym...other than that very well done 
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